Friday, March 07, 2008

Moving to a new home

This blog has been written using Blogger for five long years. In that time, I wrote and published my first novel, got an agent, and generally moaned my way through the seasons of this writing life.

It's time to move on to new pastures.

Those pastures are: right here!

That's right. The moaning will continue on my new blog.

I'd be grateful if you could update your bookmarks:

The URL for my new blog is http://ianhocking.com or http://www.ianhocking.com (though the former is preferred). (Just in case something screwy happens with my web provider again, UK2, here is the direct URL: http://ianhocking.com/index.php.

The RSS feeds are now:

Full Articles: feed:http://feeds.feedburner.com/ianhocking/twlart
Comments: feed:http://feeds.feedburner.com/ianhocking/twlcom

So come on over to the new blog. You know you want to.

(The old blog will remain up as an archive, but I've transferred all the posts to the new blog.)

Saturday, March 01, 2008

Light Reading

ZZ091F6152.pngMacmillan New Writing is an imprint whose founder, Michael Barnard, wanted to create a springboard for talented, unpublished writers with work that might be overlooked by the more behemothic players. When MNW was created, there was significant broo-hah-hah and palavery. Hackles were raised and tea cups rattled home to their saucers throughout London. "It's the Ryan Air of publishing!"

Barnard wrote a very slightly odd but informative book on his battle to create the imprint, which I reviewed on my blog here. (Note Michael Stephen Fuchs' comments to that article.) I've also reviewed both of Fuchs' MNW efforts, The Manuscript and Pandora's Sisters, as well as Taking Comfort by Roger Morris. To make matters more complicated, Aliya Whiteley, a MNW author, served a stint as an editor for the UKA Press. There she edited my first book, Déjà Vu, for which Herculean effort she will forever be in my good books - or at least the one that is good.

Last Thursday, Aliya launched her second MNW book, Light Reading, at Goldsboro Books. Is Macmillerati a word? No? Good. It would be silly. (Macmillistas?) But it was nice to see a good turn out from Aliya's fellow authors, as well as others in the loose network that has sprung up around her. Aliya gave a little speech and we all bought copies of the book. Goldsboro Books did a fine job of the hosting. The shop, on Cecil Court just off Charing Cross Road, seems to be part of a collection of specialist and curious book shops.

(As we were leaving the do, my cohabitual overunit spotted a tour group entering the road. Before I could stage whisper, "Stop! We haven't paid!" she had skipped over to join the back of the throng. Directly we overheard that Cecil Court had been used in the Diagon Alley sequence for Harry Potter and Philosopher's Stone. One lives; one learns.)

It was great to catch up with Aliya. One of the curious things about meeting people that you've only previously known electronically is that, while you know them in the sense of having lots of information about them, you aren't really familiar with they way they talk, their mannerisms and so on.

For example, few people expected me to look like such a scruffy bastard.

A big shout out to Matt Curran, whose writing is going strong. He's the author of The Secret War. We chatted about the perils of writing full time - i.e. I get all excited with the postman comes, and sometimes discuss plot points with my gerbils. Matt somewhat convinced me that Lulu might be the way forward for one of my novels (that gets lovely feedback from editors and then a couple of lines about how full their lists are). Roger Morris was there, too, and he's every bit as personable as his plog suggests. As he has mentioned on said plog, we're both struggling to write St Petersburg novels (though Roger has two in the bag already). Roger has always been quick to answer my queries on esoteric Russian things, like the name of the equivalent 'detective' rank in the Russian police force.

Also bumped into David Gardiner, who is now helping out at the UKA Press (the publisher that put out my first book, Déjà Vu) and the troubadour Jon Stone (and his girlfriend whose name, I'm afraid, I didn't catch). Neil Ayres and his girlfriend (muppetly, I've forgotten her name as well; memory like a) were also there, and it was great to meet Neil, finally. Back in the day, he published an early short story of mine called Afterlife in his online magazine, Fragment. Neil wrote a very interesting book called Nicolo's Gifts and is now co-writing an epistolary science fiction novel with Aliya, which I look forward to.

This industry. Nothing happens for long periods. You're on your own when you write a book. The sense of pointlessness is sometimes overpowering. Even if you write something that you're happy with, the fiction publishing business is so small that you need a good dose of luck to get the bloody thing actually out there. As we were making the two-hour trip back to Canterbury, my girlfriend remarked that I should try to write something really mainstream. I had to sigh. She was saying this for my own benefit; she knows that I'm losing the will to engage in the publishing game and wants me to get some motivation back. Well, I got some motivation back from talking to Aliya (she's a good writer; publishers will buy her stuff; she illustrates that the route is possible) and the other Macmillan New Writers.

I was struck by their esprit d'corps. They are quite unique, I think, in being a group of writers published more-or-less simultaneously within the same list. They represent a cohort whose members are at the same point in their careers; there are no egos (in evidence) and the sense of a team is palpable. They have not been selected because they are journalists with media connections; or because they've travelled around Moldova with a minibar; or they have a tie-in series on Channel Four. No; the books they submitted for publication were just good, that's all. MNW, for all the broo-hah-hah, is anachronistically meritocratic.

You can buy Light Reading from any bookshop, or online. Aliya has a website, a blog (co-authored with Neil Ayres), and even a book trailer.

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Friday, February 29, 2008

Friday Flash Fiction

Today's audio instalment is up over at http://ianhocking.com/Fiction_Flash/Fiction_Flash/Fiction_Flash.html.

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Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Flash fiction

Question: Is flash fiction an art form in itself, or an excuse to write for about thirty seconds, look challengingly at the cat and say, "And"? Who knows. But flash fiction - also known as sudden fiction, Kato-from-the-cupboard prose, and mashed stanza - has a peculiar appeal. It's short; sharp. Very occasionally shocking.

You'll find many bloggers dabbling with flash fiction. A brief glance at my newsreader app reveals sciffy author Gareth D Jones, Managing Director of the Velcro City Tourist Board Paul Raven, and sciffy author Gareth L Powell, all of whom are blogging flash fiction on Fridays.

Readers of this blog - hey, Dad - will be aware that I've ventured into the flash fiction before. See Stone Sun, for example.

But, Saturday morning, when I was reading the Guardian Weekend, I noticed several 'new media' types on the cover (podcasters, mostly, including Alex Albrecht.) I mentioned to my girlfriend how it's possible now to produce professional(ish) quality audio and video without big-money backing. I must have sounded rather pompous and knowing, because she said, "Well, why don't you do one?"

I blinked once.

Twice.

And here it is, m'readers. My FICTION FLASH. As a correspondent of mine, TheDudeAbides, noted, FICTION FLASH has a Twitter-like feel to it, and I'm happy about that.

FICTION FLASH will be released every Friday evening (GMT). It has an iTunes 'explicit' tag because of the occasional strong language. It will tend not to be science fiction; for some reason I'm not able to fathom, my short fiction seems to be of the non-genre sort. Episodes should be about one minute in length. It might be fun to have some guest flash fictioners - if you're interested, let me know.

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Friday, February 22, 2008

Fiction flash: Mix tape

There is an element of capture and preservation in the act of creating a mix tape for a friend. ___ is a poet. He understands metric; blends new words as hues from the primes; writes with a wooden foundation pen. It is summer as he swaps out the second cassette. James Brown for The Kinks. It is summer in his poems too. It is...it is as his left hand makes the chords shapes of Lola that he decides to take his car and drive to the golf course, drive across the golf course, ripping the fuck from the grass of the golf course, and launch off the cliff and into the sea. But ___ is a poet. There is, first, the last song of the mix tape.

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Sunday, February 17, 2008

Trouble At StoryMill

I'm trying a rather different approach to the writing of my next book. That is, I'm going to plan it. Not in great detail; just at a level of granularity that should help me avoid some of the more cataclysmic culs de sac that I've wandered down in the past.

This thing I'm typing on isn't just a type writer. It also computes. So I've attempted - variously - to engage it in the business of helping me organise the novel.

Organising a novel is like herding cats remotely using yet another cat who is completely indifferent to your whistles, hollers of "Come by!" and attempts to use your crook as a javelin on those maddeningly uncooperative but ultimately charming moggies.

I've spent a couple of hours today with an application called StoryMill, released by Mariner Software. It's an application that somewhat takes after Scrivener (though I wouldn't want to suggest plagiarism; the three-paned, database-like organisational approach is a good way to approach the novel).

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My impression was favourable at first. It's a very Mac-like application that observes Apple's human-interface guidelines.

On the leftmost panel, above, you'll notice the breakdown into chapters, actors, scenes, locations and so on. This is a great idea. You can create a list of actors, for example, and select one from the drop-down list when you're in a given chapter - signifying that the actor is present in the chapter. Likewise, you can then return to 'actor' list and see all the chapters that contain a given actor. So far so good; this is an excellent and intuitive implementation.

The bit I was most desperate to try - and the bit that has subsequently brought my mood quite, quite low - is the timeline option on the menu bar. Doesn't it look beautiful? Here, let's click on it:

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If only the buggersome thing worked.

Allow me to set up just how disappointing this is. For months, I've been searching high and low for an application that will allow me to graphically represent a story: a 'flowable chart', if you dig, that indicates the main- and sub-plots of a novel; uses connecting arrows; and degrades gracefully when information is removed. Having looked at OmniGraffle, Keynote, Lord knoweth how many free mind-map applications, and even the staggeringly expensive Final Draft, there still does not seem to be a story plotting application available for the Mac.

What you see in the above screenshot bears about the same relation to the actual functioning of the timeline feature as...oh, I'm too weary for an outlandish metaphor. Make up your own. Involving monkeys, I'd suggest.

What it should do is this: Allow you set real-time start and finish times for a scene; assign it to a plot thread; and link it through such that clicking on a scene title brings up the text comprising the scene. Brilliant! Authors like me can then finally stop re-drawing huge plot maps whose iterations take about a week and become steadily less tidy.

What it actually does:

  • Allows you to create scene but, unless the scene is very long, its representation becomes invisible. Then you have to switch to a list view in order to edit the scene, or manually change the scale. How this should be fixed: The timeline should automatically scale to the earliest and latest times in the story.
  • Brings up the scene representation one minute, then removes it the next. It does so with such impish randomness that you really hope that the thing is actually working - then it breaks. How this should be fixed: It's just a bug; fix it before releasing the software.
  • It does not live update information about the scenes when information about them is altered in other windows. So, if you change the start time of a scene elsewhere, this new start time is not reflected in the timeline view. Closing the window and opening it again doesn't seem to help. How this should be fixed: If the application will not synchronise between elements that should be synchronised, constrain the user so only one element can be altered at a time.
  • Some of the fields relating to the scenes seem to be broken. For example, I can set up a smart list (good idea) that accurately uses data like who is in the scene, but the date field won't work. I can't set up a smart field that produces a timeline of dates between 1907 and 1908, say. How this should be fixed: it's just another bug.

Overall, I really tried to like this application. It appears - pardon my ultra-casual glance at the website - to be a new iteration of an older program called Avenir, so you'd think that it would actually work. Why is this a final release candidate? Parts of the software fundamentally don't work. Moreover, the trial period is measured in terms of open-close cycles, not days or weeks, and since I've had to open and close my document about twenty times trying to get parts of the program talking to one another, I'm at the point where I need to make a decision about buying it. I won't, I suspect, be doing so.

Anyone else using software to represent story plots? Surely there must be at least one program out there that works.

Post script: I feel quite bad about this post, by the way. I've spent a longish time on the forums trying to find workarounds and the chap who wrote the software seems very nice. The application does have several excellent features...I'm just too grumpy to list them right now. Alright, just one: the progress bar on the toolbar is great. And one more: and there are some unusual proofing aids, such as a lexical frequency indicator. What's that? Oh, it's like the flux capacitor, only more so.

Post post script: I should point out that I'm running OS X Leopard 10.5.2 on a 2 GHz first-gen MacBook Pro in a lovely red Speck case. My mouse mat is from the Kennedy Space Center.

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Monday, February 11, 2008

Paul Cornell on Writing

Paul Cornell is one of the writers on the rebooted Doctor Who (and, alarmingly, Robin Hood). He wrote the DW episodes Father's Day - the one with the church and the bat thingies and Billie Piper's dad saving the day - and Human Nature/Family of Blood - the one with the doctor living as a human teacher in pre-Great War England. I reckon he's one of the best writers on telly at the moment. A few moments ago, the BBC Writers' Room newsletter appeared in my inbox with a link to an interview with Paul. Here are highlights.

If someone wants to write for a living, what advice would you give them?

I have one sentence. I have actually lots more but my one sentence is: It is your job as a writer to seek out harsh criticism of your work and change because of it.


On writing:

I think there are two good books, but only two good books, on how to write. One is "Story" by Robert McKee, which is basically everything you need to know from top to bottom. And the other is Stephen King's "On Writing" which is three-quarters an autobiography, but the little gems he has in the last quarter are worth the price of the book alone.


Tell us a little bit about your writing routine.

Well I never believe those writers who say I get up at seven o'clock in the morning, put on my business suit, go to my office and work an eight hour day, stopping only for a cup of tea at lunch time. I go for amount. I will write two thousand good words of prose, or five pages of comics, or five pages of screenplay in a working day. If I do that by lunch time then I can do what only writers can do and pop off to the cinema in the afternoons, which is the whole point of being a writer. It's what it's for. But if I don't manage to do it during the day I may even be up until the early hours hacking it out.

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Flash Fiction: Stone Sun

It is all for a right turn of the head, mid-field, and there is the sunset. The mud explodes from foot to foot, from foot to foot, and the now-gone sun makes a stain. My airless mouth hangs in shock. My hands flop and a stone trips me back to last Friday, discussing the hard problems of consciousness with some students. Finally: a bird. What is it like to be a bat? What is it like to run and run?

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