Monthly Archives: November 2011

Déjà Vu Now Available in Paperback

Several months after begin­ning the pro­cess, my novel Déjà Vu is now avail­able in paper­back. It’s identical to the Kindle edi­tion (i.e. the second edi­tion). If you’re really keen on buy­ing a paper­back of the book, you’ll see a link to the paper­back on Déjà Vu’s Kindle page. Here is a dir­ect link.

Now, the paper­back costs £6.67 and the Kindle edi­tion costs 86p. I’d advise you to buy the Kindle edi­tion — and if you don’t have a Kindle, why not buy one? You’ll get access to free out-of-copyright books and a grow­ing mar­ket­place of con­tem­por­ary fiction.

★ Proper Job

It has been a long time com­ing, but today I pub­lish Proper Job, a com­edy novel whose first draft I com­pleted more than seven years ago (US). How do I feel? Exhausted. Pleased. Quite inter­ested to see how well the book will do on the Kindle plat­form in com­par­ison to Déjà Vu and Flashback. I feel that sci­ence fic­tion does well in ebook form; but Proper Job, being a com­edy lack­ing in lasers, bug-eyed mon­sters and time travel, should have a broader appeal.

The book evolved on sev­eral fronts across the course of its devel­op­ment. The ini­tial draft was edgier. Its main char­ac­ter — then called Fabe, not Andy — was a crueller indi­vidual. It was novel where the main char­ac­ter and the reader laughed ‘at’ things. Now, the novel is one where the laughter is ‘with’.

Structurally, too, I changed some ele­ments to take it away from the some­what Hollywood three-act struc­ture. These expli­cit frame­works are well and good in ret­ro­spect, but my exper­i­ence of writ­ing Proper Job has con­firmed my pre­ju­dice that they are best applied in ret­ro­spect to help fix prob­lems. They can­not be used as a blue­print. (That is, I can’t use them like that.)

So here it is. The final draft is about 60,000 words, I believe. With revi­sions, I prob­ably worked through 200,000 or more.

Subtext and — of course — schmub­text. However, Proper Job is also about my rela­tion­ship with Cornwall.

Thanks to my stal­wart editor Clare Christian and equally stal­wart proofer Olivia Wood, without whom Proper Job would be a wibbly pile of kack.

Publish and be damned.

Cover for KDP

★ Ebook Q & A

M’colleague Matt F W Curran recently sent me some ques­tions about my adven­tures in the ebook trade. I thought my answers might be use­ful to oth­ers, so I’ve pos­ted them here.

Did you e-publish via an e-publisher?

No, I decided that it would be best to con­trol the pro­cess myself. One of the more frus­trat­ing parts of being an author is being unable to cor­rect typos in the final book, blurb, and so on. Amazon makes this trivial. My research prior to going it alone also demon­strated that many ebooks pub­lished on an author’s behalf were hor­rendously format­ted, pre­sum­ably because the job was given lower pri­or­ity and fewer resources than the more pres­ti­gi­ous print edition.

If so, what is their com­mis­sion and would you do it again?

I’ve left this ques­tion in because I did, a few months back, use the online ser­vice Smashwords. This ser­vice takes your book (format­ted in Word — alarm bells ringing yet?) and spits it out to mul­tiple online retail­ers, includ­ing Barnes and Noble. I used this because it was the only way I could get my book onto iBooks. Smashwords wanted the doc­u­mented format­ted accord­ing to some unusual con­ven­tions. I hired a nice American lady to do this for me. She trades under the name MediaWorx. I paid her $45 and she did a flaw­less job. Ultimately, it was for noth­ing, because Smashwords uses a gen­eric tool to con­vert your Word doc­u­ment into dif­fer­ent ver­sions for the online ser­vices, and the out­put is embar­rass­ingly cruddy. Fortunately, I’ve only sold about 4 cop­ies via Smashwords. The vast major­ity of my sales have been through Amazon.

If you didn’t e-publish via an e-publisher and did it wholly alone, has it been easy?

I’ll inter­pret that ‘easy’ as a rel­at­ive term. Yes, it was very easy. When I was pub­lished by a small press, I had to do all my own mar­ket­ing. I had to wait months for roy­alty cheques that never came; had no clue where review cop­ies had been sent; had to put up with a dodgy cover; had all kinds of issues with dis­tri­bu­tion; had to turn up in per­son and make myself a nuis­ance on a shop-by-shop basis to get word out.

And do you think there are any bene­fits to being pub­lished via an inde­pend­ent e-publisher regard­less of the sac­ri­fice in terms of profits? In other words would it add rel­ev­ance or legit­im­acy to your work to be seen to be pub­lished inde­pend­ently rather than self-published?

My first response is a mis­in­ter­pret­a­tion of your ques­tion, which I’ve left in. The ques­tion I thought I read was: “Are there advant­ages to being tra­di­tion­ally published?”

The simple answer is “Yes”. I grew up in an era where writers still used type­writers and my dreams of suc­cess (that is, selling a book to some­body) were all wrapped up in weighty, paper manu­scripts, lunch meet­ings with agents, and see­ing myself on the shelf of a book­shop. I still want that and I can’t help it. The desire, how­ever, is irra­tional. I’m immeas­ur­ably bet­ter off now.

And now for the answer to your actual question:

There could cer­tainly be bene­fits in terms of time-saving, but I think all the tools you need for a good book are at your dis­posal. Hire your own editor. I can sug­gest Clare Christian or Olivia Wood. Hire a cover designer, such as Emma Barnes. The trick­ier bit is the lay­out of your book, but you can prob­ably hire someone to do that too. I’m not whether it’s a good use of money to hire a middle man (the ‘pub­lisher’ again) to do this for you.

How much do cover-designs cost?

I’ve got three cov­ers. The first, Deja Vu, was a stock photo from iStockPhoto.com, which I bought for about £50 and worked into my own design. Flashback was designed pro­fes­sion­ally by Emma Barnes for £699.13 (though I’ve since star­ted using another design based on an iStock­Photo vec­tor, which works bet­ter as a thumb­nail; I’ll use the Barnes design for a paper­back). The cover for my romantic com­edy Proper Job is a com­bin­a­tion of two vec­tor graph­ics, totalling about £80, which I put together in my own design.

Are you mak­ing enough money for it to be a financially-worthwhile endeav­our (of course, simply being read is worth­while any­way, but for the extra effort and time put it to get it out there — was it worthwhile?).

In a word, yes. My cur­rent income from the books since March is £2,072.11 and $222. Outgoings are £1,268.40. Profit about £800 before tax. That’s not huge, but the ini­tial costs are all fixed.

How did you come to the price point of the two books? I note that Flashback changed to a cheaper price — did that help?

I wanted the books to be free. (I’m lucky enough to have a full time job as an aca­demic, so I was pre­pared to pay for the cov­ers and edit­ing myself.) Since that wasn’t straight­for­ward, I made them as cheap as pos­sible. This took a little nerve, I must admit, par­tic­u­larly when I saw the ini­tial sales take off, but it’s import­ant to remem­ber that I’m in a pos­i­tion where nobody knows who I am. I want as many people to read my books as pos­sible. Meanwhile, I’ll be mak­ing a brand of my name if I’m any good. There is room for increas­ing the price later on, but for now it’s as well to remem­ber that the mar­ket is not demand­ing my books at all. They’re buy­ing them on a ‘Why not?’ basis. If I increased the price sig­ni­fic­antly (say, into the 70% roy­alty rate, which needs a sale price of £1.70, I think), it’s very likely that I would flat­ten my sales.

Secondly, I’m in it for the long haul.

As for the price of Flashback, I did increase that briefly to £1.70. That was, in ret­ro­spect, prob­ably an irra­tional move motiv­ated by the price of its cover. I wasn’t sure at the time that the sales pro­file of Deja Vu would remain the same. Turns out it did. When Flashback earned back the cost of its cover, I dropped its price. The sales cor­rel­ated very closely with price.