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  1. Very, very interesting, well paced and full of fresh information for the reader, who just loves ‘to be there’ and learn this kind of stuff. Situation, setting and characters all clear.
    Just one sentence overwritten, or in other words a little (read: jolly) awkward to get the hang of in one go, making it off-putting, I think:
    Bulb light glowed behind the dials of the radio equipment, which was painted matte-black in contrast to the militaristic dun of the fuselage.

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